A Little Piece of Note For My Leaving Girl

Honey... that's how I always and will always call you

I hope this is not the last wish I ever said, hopefully not!

The time has rolled, gliding so fast

So untraceable that we could not even sense its smoothest move

On the unending path

Along which we have always been 

Striding feet to feet

Measuring every inch of its unbinding tracks

Still trying to find the “very us”

So deep within

It’s not quite yet over until at last

No thickest blanket of night fog

Could ever cool you down to stay a little longer

No strongest chain of hands

Could ever retain your even stronger bond of firm will of leaving

But, what else to say 

Is there uphead another way

In lines await for you to pick

So is for me

Nothing else could I say 

But … so long my beautiful girl

Pleased to ever have such a “kind hearted and tender heart girl” as you

Please be so kind as to accept my apology

For all the wrong-doings and harmings

That I either consciously or unconsciously did to you

Along the journey of our togetherness

I’m so sorry to ever break you right in the heart

Now, I know

I could not hold you to not let go

Stride along new paths

Start up new days

Find out new ways

For a better future

One sure thing I want from you 

Is “Don’t ever forget your left-someone”

I do really hope we’ll be friends now and forever

Even though we have no more special relationship

No matter how far we are …..

So long, honey …….

So long …….

Written by: Lintang Sunu

Analysis:

broken heart poem
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This poem expresses the writer's feeling about his frustration of letting his girlfriend's going. He loves her ex-girlfriend a lot. He reminds her girlfriend how he was happy to be with her. Each time they passed altogether were full of happiness. 

He says that the time has rolled and gliding so fast, means that the writer feels that the time they had moved so fast because of the happiness they had. He was shocked of knowing that the girl was about to leave him.

He tried his effort as to hold her not to go. Still, the girl did not want to stay any longer to keep their relationship anymore.

Yes, love is such. Sometimes love is unpredictable. Love is something comes and goes without being predicted. It comes as it wants to and goes by without any sign.

Because of it, the writer realizes it then that he could not hold her not to go. He realizes that she has the right to choose her own way to start up her new life, her new ways, as to find out her own future life.

The writer could only expect that the girl will not forget him anymore, no matter how far they are.

The last words he said, "So long honey...." means that he expresses without any power to hold her again. 

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